This is quite a nice piece of art, well deserves being featured on EqD! I like the dreamlike feel of it and the warm golden colours. The composition is pretty good, though the buildings could be positioned a bit more interestingly; either more to the right, or to the left to contrast with the shape of the cloud mass.
Speaking of buildings and contrast... the towers (city?) look rather lone and plain. I would've liked to see something around their base to make them a more solid part of the image, such as smaller buildings or some sharp-edged clouds. This kind of work would also benefit from a higher contrast value with shadow and light in the clouds. For an image this large it lacks some detail, as well.
That said, you've successfully captured the feel of a city out of reach up in the heavens. This is a very nice idea with a beautiful execution. A more careful composition with more contrast between light/shadow and towers/clouds could have made it exceptional. As it stands, it's a beautiful piece with an unrefined look.
Speaking of buildings and contrast... the towers (city?) look rather lone and plain. I would've liked to see something around their base to make them a more solid part of the image, such as smaller buildings or some sharp-edged clouds. This kind of work would also benefit from a higher contrast value with shadow and light in the clouds. For an image this large it lacks some detail, as well.
That said, you've successfully captured the feel of a city out of reach up in the heavens. This is a very nice idea with a beautiful execution. A more careful composition with more contrast between light/shadow and towers/clouds could have made it exceptional. As it stands, it's a beautiful piece with an unrefined look.
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